My tongue wrote this poem on your back, when you took your rest next to me,
But I wiped it away so no one else could see…

Your bra’s on my floor. ..
Cuz we said the humidity is too high for shirts in here,
Then we ironically made more heat and now there’s mist in the air,
Now your head is laying on heavy pulse that you’ve cause,
On this soft blanket to comfort the scratches on my back that you cause with your claws,
While I try to kiss away those bites on your neck and ear,
Its nurturing not sexual, but it causes the moans I love to hear…

Without that bra you’re heart seems near…
No more trips to my dream land cuz my fantasy is, right here…

Your bra’s on my floor…
So you can imagine where my tongue is,
Giving your body the sweetest tounge kiss…
My tounge’s deep…

We’re Moving far past flaming passionate desire,
As soon as you’re bra hits the floor, our bodies are on fire…


22 thoughts on “Bra on my floor – Shawn Price

  1. Another fab poem, I love the idea of a tongue making poetry on the back and it being wiped away, so beautiful. Two things it ought to be ‘tongue’ and ‘Your bra’s on my floor’ not you’re bra (that’s you are). I know it’s horribly pedantic and kinda rude of me to come on correcting that, but I really love your poetry and what it says and don’t think anything should take away from it. Really fresh writing.

      • Honestly you’ve got the most important things, the talent and poetic soul to write these things and that originality too. I admire anyone who can write a poem and make it feel like the most natural thing. Grammar and spellings can be changed in no time. Keep writing I really look forward to reading more. I mean that genuinely too.

      • Poetry is art. It makes you feel. You should never ignore or downplay art if it has spelling/grammar errors in it, because the feeling is far more important. Well done, this is wonderful. You just write how you write as long as you FEEL it – because if you don’t… it won’t be any good.

  2. Shawn, you’ve got some skills…..I like what you wrote alot, it’s sensual…playful…it says alot about you…which IMHO, poetry should say something about the writer…

  3. You have the heart of a poet and a lover. Beautiful, indeed! Thank you for sharing this with the rest of us. And I love the title, “Bra on the Floor”. And thanks for visiting my blog!!

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